http://www.deviantart.com/view/26861330/
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text was an e x t r e m e l y bad decision man...
the pattern should be taken off... hmm... also, the bright area is too large - takes off all the depth, which is really what this work is trying to show.
looks like some brushes slapped ontop of the middle to make a bright spot. bad. and the pattern. bad
rest is good
Not really feeling this one, the pattern doesn't look good at all imo.
not feeling it either, agree with the others about the pattern, and the text is real bad
Its a bit too busy in the middle, where the C4D is... too bright, and text doesnt fit at all...
dont like this one, sorry :(
ummm . just to break the chain, it's not that bad. but i assume people would expect more from you ;)
the depth isnt that bad..
the grid makes the depth less however, and the brushwork is too overworked and flat.
