abstraction

http://img520.imageshack.us/img520/60/intrusive7kt.jpg

c&c?

I don't really have a good title/text for it. So far I've got "intrusive" seeing as the bright part looks as though it's...you know...intruding? Any ideas there?

edit: Version, well it's actually version 3, but we'll treat it as version 2. M'kay?
http://img505.imageshack.us/img505/8...usivev30au.jpg

edit #2: One more time!!!
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9...usivev40zj.jpg

Text is too big. Seems a little grainy too, but the feeling is pretty neat!

Get rid of text. Give it more contrast and depth. And then it will be a lot nicer. :)

Updated with new version!

Make the text smaller. Take that upper lefthand part out thats dull green ugly part out! Then its great :)

that new one is lots better

Finally...I think? Unless someone else brings something up that I big-time agree with.

http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/9...usivev40zj.jpg

I still like v1 the best. It has the best use of light, which you seemed to make worse and worse as you updated. >_<

v3 best but it still needs depth it is flat at the moment

work on the contrast a bit more.