C&C PLS!

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

alright C&C PLSS thanks u :)
EDIT....

if your wondering wat i did to krouser i added more detailed scars, turned his eyes white and made the snake sign on his knife more nodicable. :)

what you did to the render is nice, but what you did with the BG is horrible, it;s boring plain, looks like about two layers, and the monotone makes it look worse, i think you can do better with this, text isn't good either.

hmm k wats monotone? and wat style should i use wit this sig? (grunge, abstract) thnaks for the C&C oh and wat to do wit text any ideas for me?

monotone is single coloured

i'm thinking grunge but you need more detail

and text go plain black or white, try staying around 14 or smaller for size, and keep more to the corners, and don't add effects

allright sweet deal thanks :)

Nice manipulation of the render, it's cool. Good job with that.
I agree with what Sythe said about the BG and text. Try using different fonts and styles for the text, don't just stick with one font.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

how abhout that...anybetter?

Urmm, coloring is a bit better.
Now, you gotta blend the render in, some depth..text is a bit better, not sure how you can improve it though, cus i suck at text too :P

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v1...deathrow_2.jpg

ALRIGHT finnal version i hope her it is :)

thkans to bhxTyrant for the blood :)

Way better. The white border doesn't work though, make it black, it'll be better imo. It's still lacking depth, but this is much better.
Nice :)