http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...smudgecopy.jpg
most of u know that ive been doing abstract smudge for a while, i decided to give it a grungy look and color it a different way and add a render. tahts waht i came out with. pretty good for an experiement i think.
c'n'c please
01-04-2006, 07:18 PM
HippY
i like it...gud colours, n the render fits well...but i think there is something missin, i cantg figure out what tho, i'll get bak to you..lol
01-04-2006, 07:20 PM
`Kakashi
kk thanks bro ^_^ i wanan hear what you thinks missing. i wanna improvex0rs alotx0rs :)
01-04-2006, 07:23 PM
HippY
right dunno this is just my opinion, but i think if you move the whole render n back to the right a lil then in the dark section seperated by the gap i think you shud place another focal point. not sure what but i think something dark n shiny
01-04-2006, 07:37 PM
`Kakashi
kk im taking this into consideration
01-04-2006, 08:16 PM
C K
I dislike the way you blended the stock, also the background could use a bit more flare its pretty boring right now. Other then that its okay.
01-04-2006, 08:41 PM
`Kakashi
any tips on how to do so?
01-04-2006, 09:32 PM
C K
Not really. Play around with it.
01-04-2006, 11:28 PM
deathrow_
i like it too but wasnt this juss copied form a video tut? sorry if im wrong but it looks good :)
01-05-2006, 02:47 AM
sythe
i'm with CK don't like the blending, and i think the size is too big and that thre is too much black