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ragnarok :)
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I think the bg could use some color. And maybe some contrast.
the right side of the render that goes to the right is too jaggy. left too..blend it in with a feather. plus make the background better with depth and color
as always lumix lovely work, but maybe some colour? and try smoothing it out a lil, :)