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I decided to re-do the other talib kweli sig i made.

http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/1584/talibsig25ng.png

Eww, looks real bad. The bg doesn&#39;t suit the stock at all, the pattern overlay doesn&#39;t look good, text needs improvement, the lineart doesn&#39;t go with the sig.

I don&#39;t think it&#39;s that bad, only thing I really don&#39;t like is the outline you have on the right of him (his left).

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Originally posted by Sobek@Jan 17 2006, 03:21 PM
The bg doesn&#39;t suit the stock at all

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You read my mind..

Rid the boxes, they&#39;re yuck..
This type of abstract BG don&#39;t work o.O
I like the "06" text. Lineart&#39;s not TOO bad, it&#39;s okay around the head.

stock needs sharpening..

Background and text looks like it would be cracker, but that render as mentioned isn&#39;t working with it.

the text is good, render meh, and the Bg is too bright and chaotic, it is hard to put a Bg like that with anything

Thanks for the feed :D