Been a While...

Ive been out of the game for a while, I need some serious CnC on my first work since. BE HARSH!! B)

http://img1.yoxio.com/img/114625.jpg

ok, i will be harsh because you told me to be :P

firstly text is pathetic, really doesn't work too small and boring, it stands out too much and just doesn't go with the rest of the sig.

the Bg is a bit boring and plane/ flat, and a bit monotone, you need to add some colour and variation in it, use curves and level as well as different brushes, filters etc.

i like what you did with the render, but the render is low quality, too small for the sig and the right side isn't blended well.

hopefully this will help.

same as abive, but wud also like to say that i think the sig is too wide also.

hippy

time to bring the harsher side of me out^^(I'm really a nice guy :D)

text looks horrible, too small, totally the wrong font...
bg looks too plain and it simply boring, monotone and ugly
render has a very crappy quality and doesnt not work AT ALL with the bg...
border is too fat and colorless...
and imo its overall TOO big...

the render quality isnt all that good. the render is way to small for the size of the sig, so maybe smaller sig but keep the render the exact same dimensions. the pixel font realy doesnt look all that good, but speaking as somebody who isnt all that good at text, who am i to say what text looks good and what doesnt?

IT TOTALLY SUCKS

lol kidding

it's too black + white and monotone and text's bad

sharpen it