new style thing

hey guys tryin new stuff
C&C pls

http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/3...tract110je.jpg

hmm the blue is too blueish and that makes the quality less. the text is a think you should work on too along with the border that just needs to be black.

I don't know, it seems like theres too much of the render in it to me, and since it's all blue it loses something like MF said. It lacks oomph, if that makes any sense to you.