KYoHoCHEN

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hmmm. its pretty nice. though there is too much of that one color on the bottom imo, bit empty

It looks like a giant tag more then a piece of art. I really dislike the colors and the thing at the top and bottom. The typo needs work, as does the background..just kind of everything in the piece needs changed or tweaked to look better.

Whats up with half being red and the other half being just the way it is in gfx? the light loooks messy, there are strange cutoffs and the quality seems low on some places..fix that