New1

hey guys just whipped this one upquick so wat u think?

http://img210.imageshack.us/img210/9323/bcont1uv.jpg

It's nice, but I think theres a little bit too much going on. Also, sort the text, it doesn't look right there.

I also have to say that I <3 your current muchos.

cheers dude i like your currnet also nice work

Too much going on, it needs a bare spot.

bg needs some sort of focalpoint imo
also for this one, make the render stick out more :P

hmm i think u should blend the render more?