A Fire Inside

New abstract =]

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/548...einside5ct.png

also made this:

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/3...enheart6yg.png

wow i like it except i think you should change the color of the border, juss imo

#1: I don't think you should change the color of the border. It fits, and nice border btw. I just think you should sharpen the render, because it's too blurry atm. I don't really like the brushing on top for some reason, just doesn't fit with the theme imo.

#2: I think you should lose the pixel squares behind, text needs work too. Don't like the repeating pattern on the BG, just doesn't look right, it's bothering me. Just my opinion.. :)

#1: i think the border doesn't work not the right colour, render is too hard to see at the moment, and the brushing doesn't look right.

#2: same as chucks.

hmm. i dont really like the first one, at all, sry man

and on the second one, scrap the squares, that bg alone looks quite nice, gj though

Thanks for all the feed.