Rise Against

I suck at large art, trying to get better. Click it to view on devart.

http://img369.imageshack.us/img369/3...against7br.png

it's a bit weird, but looks really nice, the yellow piece on the top left looks weird and slightly out of place, what is it?

dont like this one
no focal point no lightning text is bad and I hate renders in large pieces

I quite like it, ALOT! <3
bg could be just a little less chaotic thats all :S

it all seems a bit random..very random actually..=/