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very cool man not sure about the colours but everything else is gd love the lighting.
nothing wrong wit the text u could try changing the colours or puting it so it looks like it is part of the render. ;)
Can't see anything wrong with it, but i just dont like symetrical sigs.
Use a new font for text.
to me it looks way to busy and chaotic. also it looks pixelated and bad quality