Brushed Render Wallpaper

I made the render in cinema 4D and used brushed it over a little, added some text, border etc.

Comments?

Hope you all like!
http://img115.exs.cx/img115/7898/wallis1nt.jpg

thats pretty sweet, the render looks like a ribbony render wiht an explode effect. can you plz post the original render? i'd like to see that. the only problem is that the text needs work definetly. i dont like hte font, i dont like the plain white of it, i dont like the motion blur :\ sorry it needs work, but other than that its awesome.

Sure, I'm not that grat at renders sometimes but here it is.

http://img154.exs.cx/my.php?loc=img154&ima...led1copy4lw.jpg

I made it transparent and flipped it

Gregs post was deleted due no new policy, he should have read the rules, any short critique posts that just say great or rubbish will be deleted as they are of no use. It is harsh but fair.

This is a great piece, I haven't seen you do big scale projects in a while. The render is very interesting and the colour scheme chosen works well. Think you may have gone over board with the star brush. But the text glow looks great. What font is that?

love it mate. personaly i find it a tad bright, maybe the star effects is a tad overdone. but teh colours work very nicely together and the font is perfect for it. Overall its very good (well better than anything i reckon i could do :D)

jeez thats actually a really awesome render, i'd like to see how you made it.

Great renders both :P very cool effect, the first ones font doesn't really fit it's like 2D to the render.