Printable View
http://img70.imageshack.us/img70/3030/saveme6td.jpg
ok i made this for CGS, just to post something new.
hmm this took under 2 hours to fully complete, its lacking i know but i didnt really ahve time to getr into lighting and shadowing and overall detail :9 sorry :)
well tell me what you think :) gah i flattend the PSD file stupid me
Fairly nice, needs more detail / postwork though :).
Keep it up ;).
^As he said more detail is needed. Also, probably just me, but I'm having trouble focusing on any one point other than the flower slightly. Lighting would SEVERLY improve this sig...
sig? its a digital painting... also, there is lighting in it. If you took the time to look at it, you might notice that the right side has a red glow and the left has a yellow/gold glow. Now, looking at the robot thing, you can clearly see gold being reflected off of it on its left side, and red on its right side. Look at the image and think a little bit more before you post criticism.Quote:
Originally posted by Ghost@Feb 23 2006, 06:45 AM
Lighting would SEVERLY improve this sig...
[snapback]113563[/snapback]
As for what I think, I think it needs more depth. At the moment its paper thin. The lighting, as I've already described, is decent. I like it. I too feel that there needs to be more detail.
The robot and all of its other junkie parts on its right look super flat....
would look a lot better if it, like Jack said, had more depth, and not look "paper thin".
i agree with jack and spider.
thanks for the comments guys :9
looks low quality to me at the moment, needs more detail etc.
As far as composition goes, I think it would work better with the flower in the very centre, with more emphasis on the light coming from the flower, making it perhaps a more dominant light source.
Also try making larger brushstrokes, with brushes on a higher opacity, this would help make adding detail alot easier.
I agree that it could do with some more detail, perhaps zoom to about 400% and add scratches to the metal on the robot.
Also, the haze around the edges of the piece would work better if they were a bit more subtle.
Great idea though, and you've pulled it off well.
I'd like to see a version of this from a different perspective, perhaps looking headlong on to the character, with the flower at the front, that way you could make it look almost like a movie still.
Hope that helps,
Good work!
Seki
thanks seki, yea i think that a diff perspective would look better :) just this this for multi surface lighting practice, if it camne out ok in the end that a plus but reall just did it for a quick sketch practice.
ty all for the comments
