Jet

This one is kinda inspired by one of Lumix's older pieces. I already merged all the pieces together and did some stuff, so I dunno how to go back and fix it, but now that I look at it...the missile (the color I think) looks a little weird. But all C & C are welcome and requested please.

http://img159.imageshack.us/img159/4921/fly0qp.jpg

I think the smuding needs a little work on the plane, I get what your trying to depict, but I don't think it quite flows. The text and sky are fine however.

i wud say the missile at the back looks to cartoony to go with the plain if u get me. i wud also dull down the colors of the sky a bit because again it looks quite cartoony