The Pain

Well I Got a few bad comments last time...so what do you think this time??
http://www.imghst.com/uploads/tenchi...pgress-WEB.gif

(PS Dunno What to do with the Text..Help with that pls and rate)

i dun really like da border...its aight doh :P
and change the text

Anyone Else?

make the render blend more too...i just noticed that.. :P

Ok i did that

eh...i dunno...try makin the render b&w or sumfin....its just missing sumthin ;)

b&w?

Nice Pic Dude.
Border's Nice :P
And U Should Outline The Text..
Like Crofty did in his tutorial: http://forums.gfxvoid.com/t-369.htm
Just With Different Colors :)
Peace Out B)

Thanks...I Did that..BTW Whats B&W?

Try putting the text on Soft Lite add a drop shadow and maybe outer glow.

Im not sure if this will look good or not but w/e :) try putting your render to screen or color dodge or burn.