need some honest input

Hi guys!
I would appreciate some honest input on this big piece. thx.

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/30446138/

Not bad. Maybe the wrong section though.

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Originally posted by Marcus aka Sonny Soprano@Mar 18 2006, 08:33 PM
Not bad. Maybe the wrong section though.

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oops, sorry. if a mod reads this, feel free to move it. thx

nice .. but te lightning @ the planet is to pointed .. try to make it bigger and smoother

Blur out the mountains a bit so it looks as if it's out of focus, also, don't make the cross looking star so big.

The lighting on the moon or planet (whichever) needs to be less condensed. It has to flow smoothly across it.


Do you wanna collab on this piece man!?! I would be happy to collab with you, that is, if you want to.

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Originally posted by nyhl@Mar 19 2006, 03:57 AM
Do you wanna collab on this piece man!?! I would be happy to collab with you, that is, if you want to.

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I´d love to! I could really need some help to give it that little extra! :)
If you use msn, feel free to add me: the_man_who_invented_fire@hotmail.com
(I know, the adress is a pain in the ass! lol)

basicly the clouds look a bit flat and the lighting on the moon/planet looks out needs more flow gj though man.

Looks good to me. That star is a bit to big though.

Just do that collab with nyhl and itll be great!

ps. Ive seen you on AA before ;)