the thing we call pride

http://www.deviantart.com/view/31027519/

comments please..... just a mini project... about 3 hours or soo.... dont really like the outcome but w/e

i think it is cool m8

I think it's a little random at the moment, maybe needs a focal point, and more flow, and some parts are a little rusty, like on the flag at the bottom, you can see some dark red on the edges.

Not that bad, but i think you can do better.

It’s not bad but it lacks focus and it needs to be cleaned up a bit (red on the corner of flag).