Sprite sinatura

I saw some signatures with a little sprite in em and some abstract,smude looking b so i thought hel that doesn't look bad ,, i looked up for a tut and heres my try..

http://img525.imageshack.us/img525/6...ritetag0hb.jpg

I think its kinda kewl but i would like an honest opinion from sum1..? ;)

i dont like the pink in the background, make it brighter red, like the shorts, or yellow.

well im colour blind so i don't bother :D

lol fuk the pixel sprites

http://img427.imageshack.us/img427/6...ritetag0mx.jpg