Sig-Splash type thing....

http://img81.imageshack.us/img81/5249/wipthing2vb.png

Reckon it's finished or what? I'm not sure....

i like the shape of the focal point..

you need more effects-smokes/sparkles and some transistion from light to dark.. =)

Yeah it looks nice but doesnt look finished, add moree, more more more moreee :P

i think it needs more but looks alright for now