new one

i kinda like this one. colorwise i guess.
render and text are kinda iffy to me.

http://i4.tinypic.com/106ge1v.jpg

CnC? rate? current?

thanks,

-Murf

i dont think the render goes well. the bg looks more abstract and i think the render would fit better with a more grunge bg. the text is kinda off too(just the font) but its blended well into it. Also theres something in the top left corner that black spot, that just doesnt fit

not feelin the text and the black spot...darken the left side a bit
try some smudgin maby it will help