First Sig

Hey, i made this yesterday. Its my first sig but i think its pretty good no ?
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7.../Colintest.jpg

ummm...for one its too dark...colors dont blend and thats a bad render for this pic....but i give you a 6/10 for effort ^_^

well it was not that dark when i made it but i saved it and it looked like that =P

Maybe because it's the JPEG's fault?

Text, you can even read. And the render you can't see. Put a stroke on the text.. opacity it a bit into the background and re-try the render so it actually shows in the background.

1) Font is too dark, make it white with overlay.
2) The blending of the head needs a lot of work.
3) Good job.

well its only my first sig ima take the feedback you guys wrote and make a new one :)

find some abstract brush packs or grunge ones..whichever you prefer and brush up that background..its to plain!..and try multicoloring..its always good to learn that early..heres a link to it..Angry Johnny's mutlicoloring tutorial for you! You should also try out Juicy's render blender tutorial under Other Tutorials..should be one of the first 3 there..

anyways about the sig..way to dark..after you brush and color it more..try adding some brightness/contrast to it..but not TOO much at all..otherwise it won't look that good..for text I always go to DaFont grab some there and try em out..and as for coloring..just basically experiment with em..anyways..good luck man! :D Hope that helps ya

Ps: a border would look good on it and maybe a smaller size.. :P

wow thanks ! i did another one before u said that
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...Untitled-1.jpg

ima go try another one with ur tips... ty :)

i think its okay,, get more font sets,, that would help alot