Sig for a friend

http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/2...die2jpg5yt.jpg
Uhm yea, this would be my second attempt at this style, I believe. CnC would be appreciated. I think I can improve quite a bit more.

EDIT: There's a white border on there, by the way. The forums he's planning on using this for are dark, so yea. White border, yay.

sweet sig, other than the text. its kinda plain, and a bit obtrusive.

change the text. I don't like the white overlay, it doesn't look right.