[LP] Broken Down

Any comments, crit, or +fav's are welcome. :D
http://www.deviantart.com/view/35976717/

too many clouds, needs more depth and more accurate lighting. Render looks cool though

render makes it look really nice, some good effects, needs touch ups here and there, i think another lightening thingy would look good.

Cool work man, looks sorta low quality in a few areas to me, and it may look better with another lighting thing on the right? Try that.

Thx guys, ill use the suggestions and comments in the next piece I do. =)