grenade jumper

and this one (isnt finished):
http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b1...breathcopy.png

any suggestions/tips for this would be much appreciated, I thought it looked good so far so I want to try and fix the depth and stuff.


updated version:http://i19.photobucket.com/albums/b1...reath2copy.png

Try cleaning it up by the head of the stock :)
Pretty alright sig though!

looks pretty nice, i like the updated version, but i think that you should change the text.