[LP] Devoid

Devoid:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/36352916/

Serving BrokenEden's artpack entitled Aftermath

This is the first of 3 that I have for the pack. Ill submit more later.

I've seen so many like this, but okay. The center of it is too sharp, which makes it look ugly, which makes me not look at the focal point. I love the lighting you used, and you have nice materials. I think the blur to the right happend a bit too fast, but after all, these are just my opinions.

Also, the yellow on the top right is distracting me. Not one of your best, try sharpining and blurring less. It's a good background you fit it onto though.

I kinda like it, gj :)

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I've seen so many like this, but okay. The center of it is too sharp, which makes it look ugly, which makes me not look at the focal point. I love the lighting you used, and you have nice materials. I think the blur to the right happend a bit too fast, but after all, these are just my opinions.

Also, the yellow on the top right is distracting me. Not one of your best, try sharpining and blurring less. It's a good background you fit it onto though.
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Yeah, i've heard people tell me this about this piece. I've heard the excat opposite of what you said from other people too. I guess its just not your cup of tea. Thanks for the comment though.

too sharp in middle

but its alright, not your best though, so no fav :(

sorry babe <3

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too sharp in middle

but its alright, not your best though, so no fav :(

sorry babe <3
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not yer cup o tea either. Im getting either positive or negative comments today on it =D.

+fav

Looks hot.

I like it. Has a good desrty planet feel to me.

Very nice, but I think it would be much better if you cropped off an inch or so at the top - it would balance out the light and the dark because atm there is way too much lightness imo for a dark render. It would also remove it from smack bang in the middle which helps &#39;pull&#39; the viewer into the piece.

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Very nice, but I think it would be much better if you cropped off an inch or so at the top - it would balance out the light and the dark because atm there is way too much lightness imo for a dark render. It would also remove it from smack bang in the middle which helps &#39;pull&#39; the viewer into the piece.
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What&#39;s the matter with it being in the middle? =D

Thanks though.