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It's pretty good, but I think it would look better without the character in there. Also, you might want to change that text. It's difficult to read and doesn't fit too well. I think a font that is a little bit more irregular and slightly more like handwriting would look good. The reason for that is (assuming you took the character out) it has a lighthearted/artistic/playful feel to it. Something like arial (for example) with such a defined structure conflicts with it I think. I like how you were a little different with the border. Keep it up ;)
Hot, I like.
The splatter doesnt really fit imo and the stock needs blending, but I kinda like the bg :)
