haku

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...Sigs/haku2.jpg

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...Sigs/haku3.jpg

Stock... http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v723/Bi9...ources/haku.png


All defaults, blah blah blah.

I like it, nice feel to it. Though, I don't like the bottom right and top left corners. I think you either need to fade to black/white (or near-white) more gradually or you need to tone them down a bit. As in, make the bottom right a bit brighter and the top left a little darker. They just seem a little too strong.

The light shouldn't be one big blob over his shoulder, it should be more defined rather than a blob. Add some more bg textures and sharpen them.

I really like this one, only thing you need to do (as mentioned above) is fix the lighting.

fix the lighting a bit, but I'm really liking the second one more than the first.

THe 2nd one is awesome! FIx lighting a bit and itll be sweet. Current it too :D

Great stock

Thanks. ^^'

I fixed the things Jack mentioned, I think, but the huge blob would take some work to shrink...and I like it myself. I might work on it later though.

I'll also see if I can get back to the colors I had in the second one...

Anyhoo, haku: part deux, coming up.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...Sigs/haku9.jpg

EDIT: Fixing colors is easy when you remember the neat thing called 'layers'. -_-

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v7...gs/hakuTEN.jpg