just some experiment. i dont really like it so some suggestions would be nice:
v1:
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/5305/holmeswr3.png
v2:
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/3390/holmes2le1.png
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just some experiment. i dont really like it so some suggestions would be nice:
v1:
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/5305/holmeswr3.png
v2:
http://img114.imageshack.us/img114/3390/holmes2le1.png
the render looks way outta place, change it
visually its too one-side and the effects around the stock seem kinda random and one-dimensional. try to make them a bit more dynamic and spread out if arent going to add any text.
And colours clash too much =/
