Oxide

my weak attempt at adapting to new styles lol

http://i117.photobucket.com/albums/o.../pro-oxide.jpg

Take out the white circle shade thing at the top.

its alright imo, just needs a bit more depth and less chaos :)

i'd have to agree with kyo, it looks just way too cluttered.
but good job, at least u'r trying different styles and then coming here to get advice.