yeah, i know i already posted a topic 'today', at what, 12:30 AM? oh well. a mod can delete this if it's really necessary. i can't edit the title in my old thread, so it wouldn't draw any new views, which really isn't very helpful. that would make it a lot nicer.
i think its nice but the green doesnt really match with the yellow/ orange render. text is nice aswell
11-18-2006, 06:41 PM
ev1
The render looks nice but the bg doesnt really go with it. Well, the left part is actually really nice but the second is not. The text is fine, altho i dont like the way its placed.
I'd suggest remaking the right side... Try a different brushing and diferent colour variations.
11-20-2006, 10:33 AM
imported_bAy
Great job on the stock..i really like it but the only thing that i see is the text and the blending. If you blended the stock more into the green bg it would look really good well at least in my opinion..oh and the faded diagonal lines in the bg really bother me tooo..gOOd jOb_bAy*
11-20-2006, 10:49 AM
Kyoushima
Colors don't match, stock isn't blended and text is misplaced imo :(
11-20-2006, 02:20 PM
Kelso
Personally, I liked the idea of the BG being different colors, but thanks for the input. It didn't go over as well as I thought it might, but what I'm hearing will help me with the next tag. Text obviously isn't my strongpoint, heh. Thanks, though.