I N T E N S I T Y

http://i64.photobucket.com/albums/h1.../Intensity.png

tell me what you think. It needs a bit of work imo...

I'd like to see some more effects on it, maybe some smudging, but overall its good :)

I like how the sig isn't 'full', like the borders are erased in and stuff. Pretty cool, the render looks good behind the stock too.

man, your work seems to be top quality! would love some tips and tricks to make my sigs better.

im liking the stock in this, its jus so simple but so effective

Dang i think it looks pretty sweet! :) yeah i agree with Kelso with the border it was definitly a good choice :p

Pretty good idea to have the edges like that, but they look too choppy and pixelated. Also there's a whole lot of negative space, I think it would look much better with something going on in the background. Otherwise, I think it's okay. I really like the text. Looks cool :)

First one I liked from you in a while. Nice work man :)

Wow, thanks for all the comments guys! I'm not quite done with the right side of it (it fades out too fast imo) but I'm keeping the left as-is...