Gears Of War

Was iffy about this one. it looked a little sharp. cnc plz:

http://xs210.xs.to/xs210/06514/gears.png

http://xs210.xs.to/xs210/06514/gears2.png

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too sharp imho.

Darken the sides and bring out some depth ;)

The main thing that's bothering me is the white blob of 'light'...but it definitely has potential. Just fix that up before you do anything else.

Take out the white blob.

Light is in the wrong place.. its obviously not lit from there.