Kidulthood

just whipped this up cuz i was bored C&C plz??
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v6...kidulthood.gif

not really feeling this one... its lacking in most areas 2 be honest sry.

i think the background's boring, nothing much to see really. nice try though.

ya not feeling this one either..the filter is alright but text is not good its to plain for me.the line arcross everyone is cool but doesnt fit with the sig. nice try..

ok thx anyway :) wat cud i do to the text to make it stand out more??

i dunno. i think the text fits, well at least the "everyday struggle" one.
i'd say scrap this and start a new one, make it look cooler :D