Lyrics

I Dno.. i think maybe this 1 is a lil messy anyway CnC please

V1
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Lyrics-01.png

V2
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Lyrics-02.png

V3
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Lyrics-03.png

V4
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Lyrics-04.png

V5
http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z.../Lyrics-05.png

Thanks

yeah i definatly think its a little messy alot goin on

umm i would say to make the text more visable cuz i cant see it clearly and had to look around for it. other than that i think its pretty good just to clutered

id go for v5. i think this one is not one of ur best but it is still pretty good, i think is to many stripes, thats wat through me off :D

gangsta, v5

None of them :( v1 if I have to.

Too much going on and there's not much depth. I like the left side though.. definitely not your best.

I completely agree with Chucks, it needs less happening and more depth. v5 is probably best though.

v5 is pretty cool. it lacks a lil in depth... and also i think the stock needs to stand out a bit more... but its pretty cool.

sayin the stock was black n white lol

lot of mess, no focal, sry dont like it