Supremacy Take 2

http://i188.photobucket.com/albums/z...acy-Take-2.png

Not reli sure.. maybe a lil too busy?

There's too much of a contrast between the render and the background slashy-thingy-mobobbers (If I'm correct, they're C4d renders?). What I mean is that the render is really sharp, but everything around it is too blurred.

Perhaps you could make the background gradient outwards from the render.

nice, but the render doesnt seem right for the sig with the hankerchief

it would have looked better if you had worked red into the bg so that the hankerchief doesnt look so out of place. and what Ein points out about sharpness/blur is also true.

i'm still trying to see how the guys above me see the things they don't seem to like what you got. the sig seems fine to me.

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Originally Posted by )85(

i'm still trying to see how the guys above me see the things they don't seem to like what you got. the sig seems fine to me.

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I never said I didn't like the sig, I was just giving criticism -- which, by the way, is the purpose of sharing your sig.

No don't criticise critiscism.. criticsism is a designers best freind

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Originally Posted by Einsturzende

I never said I didn't like the sig, I was just giving criticism -- which, by the way, is the purpose of sharing your sig.

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ah. nevermind what i said.