Cloud

http://img384.imageshack.us/img384/5948/tsugaruta6.png
made it for a friend

tellme whaat you think

I like the right, but i'm not sure about the mid-left area. Seems like a some sort of a blue background with a distinct pattern on top with a strangely positioned render, and the text contrasts to the rest of the tag and seems a bit choppy too. Erm, i'd say rework the left hand side..make a smooth and appealing background and slowly add C4D render/s on 'lighten' and use a soft brush as an eraser and erase areas which conflict with the rest. Then i suggest you go look at some tutorials which show you how to use gradient maps to colour sigs as 1 option to colour. Also the sharpen filter is your friend if not over applied.

Sorry if i'm being negative on most of your signatures by the way, it's not intended at all lol.

I do like this compared to the other sig in the other thread, since it seems you've experimented more on this one.

yeh the pattern doesnt look good. also the c4d is too square and angular... try using more rounded c4ds. other than that its alright.

work on blending and lighting render
bg is messy - work on deep