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Try smudging or anything to make the BG look more interesting. Right now, it looks pretty boring. Blend in the render as well and I think you should just leave out the text for now when you make another tag. Overall would look better if it was brighter and had more contrast - looks pretty dull atm.
Keep trying though! You'll get there ;)
all ur bgs are starting to look the same. try incorporating new techniques into them.