Helpith meith

this is a unfinished sig
i cant figure out what looks good or bad any more
so could u help me
any ideas on what to add or remove?

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...n1972/meth.jpg

http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...1972/meth2.jpg

how about this?
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...1972/methh.jpg


edit:
here we gooo
http://i14.photobucket.com/albums/a3...methhhcopy.jpg

not bad, I think it could've been executed a bit better but not bad :)

i cant see the first 3, but the last looks alright. i just feel that the blending could have been better