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you know what i think.
srry m8 but :P
the colors dont blend well
the dark shadowed stocks dont blend at all with the fun light neon bg colors
and the stocks arent really blended in that well with the bg to begin with
i feel like u threw this together with out really thinking about it
plus theres 4 focals, lol
usually for someone who ive known to be ok but not that good at gfx id say it looks good but work on it
but ur far from "ok" at gfx, ur damn good
so i expect a lil more from u
in conclusion
just work on ur color choice, stay away from more than 1 focal
and work a lil on flow
the jagged right angle lines kinda ruin teh flowzorz
now if u changed the stocks to ones with better colors, it would be a whole different story
but as of now id say it needs some work
