Thoughts

http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...o/thoughts.png

v2
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...thoughtsv3.png

v3
http://i114.photobucket.com/albums/n...thoughtsv4.png

i really like the intense red/yellow bit just to the left of the girl... but after that as you go left it gets kinda meh... the right is fine tho.

i agree
with SD but i dont like how the right is black and white
black and white has always seemed lazy to me
just b/c something is b and w doesnt mean its artistic
most things look better in color
and it takes more skill to match colors well
but id say if u wana stick with teh b and w
get rid of the tacky gradient on the left
and then just make the whole image b and W
and then it'll looks snazzyyyy

Maybe I'll work on the left side a little then.
But ask SD, b/w is my thing ;)

Everything looks fine, except that I really dislike the way the black render overlaps the left side.

Simply it would have looked much better in complete B&W, everything else is great.

Ok, added 2 more versions.
How do you like them?

its still the same for me tbh, the basic c4d looking stuff to the very left just looks meh, while everything else is hot.