Smoking.. b/w

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just finished... CnC ?:))

cool sig like it :D nice work

yeh pretty nice. compo could be a lil better, but pretty nice

really nice, i like
though the single blotch of slanted lines behind the stock is a little lonely
maybe add some more of it some where else
but all and all, nice stuff

lack of deep, standing out stock dosnt rly helps
get rid of scanlines,
work bit more on flow here and add some things, looks empty