V.1
http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/3534/flowtc5.png
V.2
http://img99.imageshack.us/img99/7061/flow1ls3.png
V.3
http://img223.imageshack.us/img223/9396/flow2bn8.png
i like it... CnC ? :)
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colouring could use work, but ur best compo wise anyway.
updated first post (more V's)
v2 is the best, the sharpness helped.. but i still feel the colouring is too monotone.
missing deep, focal is all over the place, try to work on it
flow is quite nice but i would remove those digonal strips and re-edit text to something more toned
