v1
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...ure-Shannu.jpg
v2
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h2...res/Shannu.jpg
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The focal needs to be the center of attention and text needs to be smaller. I like the effects tho and think there is definitley potential.
v1 is better dont like the predator bein repeated, cool effects but yeh the writing is well too big but not bad keep it up :D
what they said, plus add a border, and try working in colored versions, then you can try and see if they looks good on B/W
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Thanx! Will keep in mind...