haha that rhymed
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oversharpened/contrasted, erase some of the c4d especially in the middle.
I would have liked it much more without all that sharpness, it hurts my eyes.
Keep practising =)
oversharpened like light said.
yar too sharp m8, also like light said bout the c4d in the centre it detracts from your focal. but keep at it, your heading in the right direction.
thats rihanna aint it?....
but yeh toooo sharp but i likes it part from that
i think you should erase the c4d on the right, cause it stand in front of rihanna :(
and as other said...its a bit too sharpened :/
all the rest looks good ;)