wip collab

working on this for a couple hours now. the guy was put together by a really great friend of mine who excels at "real" (as in not digital) art. she asked me to try to put something together using a part of her stuff, so here's what i have so far.

suggestions will be duly noted.

http://www.imagehustler.com/0408/1207165870.jpg

the drop shadows are far too strong... i dunno what else treally to suggest, its not my sorta thing :S

i dont think the style really works, i dont like the arrows