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render is squashed i can still see him over the place i get the point u wanted to make the things around his head look liek are all over the place but u left naruto's body around so i cant still see him all over the place, text doesnt work at all color and blending are phail in this 1 . also theres little to no depth and blending on naruto so the sig is very flat, idk but ur work seems very untable why not try to stick to a style and work with it?
I agree with fire on some points here are my view:
1. the render seems squashed remember to hold down shift while resize.
2. Depht there a not much depht in there try to add that,
3. colors are very monotone there are only one color in there almost.
bit i disagree with fire on finding a style and then only work on that, then you will end up being good at just one thing in stead of many -,d