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hmm what to say...i say u should tone down the light source a bit....
the empty space emphasizes the colours IMo good job wit dat..
text is decent...and the blending is alright too....
i dont rlly dig the white borders....but that's alrite
nice piece my friend
its not that the light was too strong imo, just too concentrated in a small space, i use like 200px soft brush for my lighting except not directly on, probably 3/4 off of the piece just whatever looks good. you have decently good blending, and i actually love the text. only real problem is that the bg seems too sharp, i know thats what you were going for, and its not bad, just if some was a bit less maybe more depth ;]