i used tutorials for them, but what do u guys think ?
http://i327.photobucket.com/albums/k...knightcopy.png
http://i327.photobucket.com/albums/k...dmagiccopy.png
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i used tutorials for them, but what do u guys think ?
http://i327.photobucket.com/albums/k...knightcopy.png
http://i327.photobucket.com/albums/k...dmagiccopy.png
1st one has a little too much going on and it's a little hard to find the render.
Plus, it's kind of flat, there's not really any depth, so you need to work on that some.
Lighting is a bit strong too.
2nd I think you did a great job blending.
Effects on the left side are ok, but the right side is a little strong I think.
Pretty dam good for your first try though.
Keep it up :D
The second is the best.
A little contrasted on the edges but apart from that its a really good job for a first.
I think the lack of text was a good idea on this :)
The first, It seems you did too good o a job blending. I couldn't find it at first. Then I came back to the page about 5 minutes later and figured it out. It's a KNIGHT!! :). Next time you might want to make it more visible by sharpening the render, and blurring some of the BG (background), this will also add depth to the BG.
TBH i don't see a pint for those red things to be there. They seem out of place and more slapped on then part of the sig. I would get rid of them.
The text needs work. The placement and size is fine, but the font is way too extreme. try to stick to default fonts, it'll be better for you in the end.
SIg 2 is much better. Great blending but not too chaotic. Very nice for your first time overall, very nice.
well the 1st i used papa's spidy tut =D and the red things are the fractal c4d :p (is it even a fractal c4d ?)
I thought it was papas tut xD